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  1. #14
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    Nice site, flows well, things stay proportionate in different fonts and window and screen sizes.I like the FAQ stuff even though it's more helpful hints than FAQ. Definitely add to the referrals as quickly as you can;it looks light. You may want to put your full address up. Without looking at your profile here, I'm not real sure where you're at. You have a 800 number, so that's no clue.

    I like it. Thumbs up.
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  2. #15
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    Mike & Greg look like Hearty Partiers.
    R2B4BTU

  3. #16
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    You're selling a lot of equipment in relation to the number of techs there, is a lot of your work new home construction ?

  4. #17
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    Originally posted by rscamaro
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    Originally posted by benncool


    One town that I frequent quite a bit has their own web site that puts out all of the local info for the area and also links local businesses or just the phone numbers if no web sites available. An excellent idea, kinda like the local yellow pages on the internet. Take a look and see what I'm talking about.

    http://www.warwickinfo.net/

    ...Ron
    Our town does a pretty nice job of that too through the Chamber of Commerce. http://www.bennington.com/cgi/direct...NING&alpha=ALL

    Jrbenny good job of critiquing. Man don't even look at my website I already know mine is crap............

  5. #18
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    The mug shots did you lift them from their DL's ?

    they all look kinda seedy low life types
    Suggest new photos
    take with good lighting and no flash, also get people to keep their chin down and ensure the photo taker is at the same height as the people (eg a 5ft woman taking a photo of a 6 ft 4 tech will produce an odd photo.
    If you can afford it I suggest a professional photographer come to your office to take better photos

    techinicans- mechanics your call I personally think techinicans is more appropiate
    grammer errors : honeywell tstats (cares about you and your comfort -left out "about". Freon is a brand name refrigerant is more correct
    adequately spelt wrong 14 on faq 15 on faq small animals WILL often chew through wires and also clog up the inside with debris and leaves- better grammer

    service details - again bad grammer here
    I think you need to rewrite this whole first paragraph
    drop the s of the hours "we offer 24 hour EMERGENCY service
    using "which" is a form of lazy grammer sentinces almost always read better without a "which"
    Starting a sentince with: And, a build up ... just bad bad bad
    This whole page should be reworked to improve grammer and sentince structure - shouldn't take much at all
    overview page should read the office is located in the old napa building the work shop is located (next door or close by ) in the old fire hall
    our sales dept is committed TO providing
    Some one uses the wors "strive" way to many times -need to find an alternative word to mix it up a little
    Monthly specials grammer error under fall specials

    So how long is Scott anyway? need to rework the copy on him doesn't make sense
    kenny -need to rework the copy here not quite making sense
    Teresa davies -need to rework the copy -"teresa is works daily" huh?
    Brandon - replace the "strives" ugh! to "excells"

    Sorry about the brutal comments but you asked and I am giving an honest un-sugar coated opinion
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  6. #19
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    more links to the products would help as not everyone will put in a water furnace need to feature your full range of products here with thumb nails for furnaces heat pumps and acs etc
    right now it looks like you sell tstats and water furnaces

    over view page
    need to mix it up
    Doug's goal was a dedication to provide top quality service and installation. We provide sales, service and installation for the majority of the Shenandoah Valley.

    change to: Doug's goal was a dedication to provide the best quality installations and service. As a full service company we offer complete sales, service, and installation (of the equipment) we are proud to represent to the entire Shenandoah Valley.
    brackets insert the kind of equipment you sell

    under employee page Tim change to Tim is our latest addition to our service dept. We are pleased to have Tim join our service team, Tim brings more than seven years experience in the field with him. He has learned the Rheam Team values and IS ready to help our customers right away.

    Theres more But I'm sure you get the idea
    there's too many repatition of "strive" and "top"
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  7. #20
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    So exactly how long is scott? No wonder Ronda married him
    Did you all drop your pants and measure in the shop?
    www.vetopropac.com - The best tool bags on the market - The offical tool bag of choice by techs everywhere

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  8. #21
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    under the service details page
    We want to Service the Customer and then the Equipment.
    So you want to service the customer then the equipment
    Well exactly how? seems kinda rude to me


    I think your copy needs reworking badly on all pages
    too many repeated words and phrases and bad grammer and missing words

    how about a photo of your office/shop/service trucks on the home page
    Change employees page to "about Us" and include a photo of the office/shop etc
    www.vetopropac.com - The best tool bags on the market - The offical tool bag of choice by techs everywhere

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  9. #22
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    Originally posted by The Penguin
    So exactly how long is scott? No wonder Ronda married him
    Did you all drop your pants and measure in the shop?
    I'm Scott. Do you really want to know how long I am?























    Karst means cave. So, I search for caves.

  10. #23
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    BTW penguin, that is excactly what I wanted thank you very much.


    Scott
    Karst means cave. So, I search for caves.

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    your welcome Scott and don't take my critque the wrong way I tried to give alternative copy where I could
    Check out these cos
    http://www.flex.net/~lonestar/ac.htm
    http://www.littleredtrucks.com/
    http://moderncooling.com/
    http://www.dring.com/
    http://www.airco.com/
    www.vetopropac.com - The best tool bags on the market - The offical tool bag of choice by techs everywhere

    Arguing with some people is like wrestling a pig - eventually you realise the pig actually enjoys it

    Gonads serve a useful purpose but are no substitute for brains

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